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The Fight

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------------------Sonny-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------sullen ------------------stayed---------------------several-------------------------------seemed-stormy-sulking-------------------------------------------slightly----------
Something-----------------so-Susan------------------------
She----------------------------------------scared--------------------Sonny-----------she-----------------------------------------some------------------shame---------------------------So---------sake---------------------sake----Sonny----------sake-------------Susan------
She-------------------------------------------------------------suffer---------------------------------------------------------Susan------------------------sat------------------------------------Sonny--------she-----------------------------------------------------------squealed--------------Sonny----------------------------
---------Susan-said-----------
-------------said------------should------------sort--------
------------------------she-said-
------
Susan-sighed-----------------------------------Sonny--------------------she-said-------------------
--------------said--scowling-
-----------------------------------------------------------Susan-said-
Sonny---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
-----------Susan------said-----------------
She-------------------------------------------------------------------Sonny-------------------------------------she-still---------------so-she----------------------------------------
-Sonny-----she-sighed--She---------------------------------------------------------see-------------
Sonny-snapped--shoving----------------------------------------------------still------------------------------sharp-squeak---------------------------------------------Susan-------------------------------
--------------------------stop--Sonny--------------------
-------------------Susan---------------------strange-----------------------------she-stood---------------------Something---------------------------snapped-----------------------she--------------------------
----------------------------Sonny-spat---------------------------------------------------
-----------------------------------------she----------------Sonny------------------------------------------------------she------------------------------------she---------
Sonny-stared----------------------------------------------------------------------------snarled-----
-------save---------------------------Susan-screamed---------------------------------------------------------------------------stuff------------------------------------------------shit--
-Shut---------------Sonny-----------Susan-------------------------------still-scowling-
--------------------------------Sonny-said-
----------smashed------Susan-----------------------She----------Sonny--------------------------------------shock-
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Sonny-said-
Susan-s----------------------------------spread-----------------------------She------------------------------------------slowly-----------------------------She--------------------------------------------------------------
Here is an experimental poem I wrote. It's a block of text (my block of text. I didn't steal it.) with all the words cut out except for the ones beginning with the letter 'S'.
Please tell me what you think of it, especially what you think is happening/what you think it means.
The formatting's all wrong because of the transition from Word to internet, but Oh Well. Just assume it was much more brilliant when I first wrote it. ;P
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RogueOfHeart's avatar
:33 < that sounds like someone died! :00
:33 < after a little while the names start blurring together a little bit.